Constructive criticism on memoir?

i think its to much of a clif hanger. but glad to know you got to meet her. and were safe about it with permission and etc. Try and work on the ending sounds original but give it a happy ending an ending everyone wants to hear like, Before I could begin to panic about this emerging into an awkward moment,my mother indeed saved it, "Do you ladies like pizza?" she asked.Inviting them in. Over pizza and pop we talked & laughed for hours on it. It felt as if i had known her my whole life. or something. idk. hope i helped. =]